Fighting These Feelings Poem by Brianna Trombley

Fighting These Feelings

Rating: 5.0


For such a long time I've wanted you, waited for you
Back then it wasn't what you wanted, but now you do

I can't tell if you're playing, or if what you say is true
If you feel the way you claim to feel, I wish I only knew

I have a shell around my heart, to protect it from the pain you might inflict
Either you love me or you don't, either way you have my heart tricked

Im fighting these feelings, I have no want to fall
If you're not going to catch me, I must stand tall

You want me to put myself out there, leave my heart on the line
But how can I know you're not going to break it like you did last time

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dislocated Heart 22 January 2009

All I have to say is follow your heart.... even if its on the left, its always right. Nice poem

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 February 2009

You can fight those feelings if you think its worth doing.Nice writes Brianna.

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Matt Burgett 02 February 2009

Very nice...very beautiful......very true

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Little Morning Star 29 January 2009

waiting for someone needs a big patient.. hope you can stand it.. great job..

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Brianna, Lovely couplets.....I appreciate the effort.

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Kimber Harrison 22 January 2009

It's really heartfelt. It speaks.... Really good!

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