Eric Elliott

Rookie (09/28/1992 / HELL! ! ! ! (maybe))

The Wetting - Poem by Eric Elliott

Hair line cracks on the east wall
open slowly to drown us all

water starts bleeding out
hours pass then people shout

rushing up to the land above
the people shout, scream, and shove

rushing down and filling up
people traped must rise above
trying to breath, they start to gag
water covers them in their rags

they claw at walls then at them selfs
swifty they die, fish will feed on their eyes

the ones that made it up above no longer know the feeling of love.


Comments about The Wetting by Eric Elliott

  • (8/17/2009 11:23:00 AM)


    This is my favorite so far. Great rhyming and great description of the scene. I give it a 10. (Report) Reply

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  • (8/16/2009 11:37:00 AM)


    Thought provoking and good rhymes.10 (Report) Reply

  • (5/18/2009 4:19:00 PM)


    hmmm....
    interesting...
    i like the flow....
    it's nice..
    thanks for sharing.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 18, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 2, 2010


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