aAveLi ness

Rookie (June 17,1989 / Malaysia)

The Whirlwind Of Suffering - Poem by aAveLi ness

Drifting in the wind
Turning, surging, twisting
In this whirlwind
Is the feeling
When I’m with you

My movements are control
By this whirlwind
Like my decision are too
By the light of you
But you are not aware

In this whirlwind, I feel
Tired, suffocated, lifeless
Your presence serves
Those feeling to me too
But you were blinded in your ignorance

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  • Manonton Dalan (10/26/2008 1:40:00 PM)

    this is very beautiful. thanks md. write more please. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 10, 2008

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