Sunday, August 8, 2010

The Wings Of Love Comments

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If I could travel on the wings of love
Tonight, I would adorn with kisses
My lovely misses,
Then we would fly to the moon
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Leslie Alexis
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Cami Lindsey 05 November 2011

This is amazing! ! ! I'm so glad I read it.

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Shadow Girl 05 November 2011

Lovely sentiments, lovely flow and rhyme....made me smile...makes you believe that with love, anything is possible. Especially liked the part - And draw me a river From love’s own stream To never end the dream If you truly find love it would be a shame for it to ever end. Great poetry -SG

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Jessie Peter 05 November 2011

aaaaaah! its such a make-u-feel-good poem! sounds like a dream. is it dedicated to some1?

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Darkangel Flyfree 04 November 2011

Great poem! ! I love the rhyming and the expression of ''Upon the wings of love, Fly with me.''

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Crimson Love 04 November 2011

This poem is beautiful, The rymes were phenomenal, I also love the bit where you explain the honeymoon in space. truly playful, and lighthearted. 'We’d honeymoon on Saturn, With stars as our lanterns, We’d walk the milky way And fall into the sky; Watching comets fly by' My favorite little bit :)

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