...The Wood Gatherer... Poem by Ena Nin

...The Wood Gatherer...

Rating: 5.0


You gather words
like wood
and burn them
altogether.

Smoke
dances gently
into the night
and finds
its way
to my heaven.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Dawson 12 March 2016

Yours words have a wonderful affect, but when I reflect I find that their exact meaning though intrigueing, is elusive. Keep the words coming, though. Dont stop! !

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Fred Babbin 08 October 2010

You make such an artisti use of words

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John Oconnell 27 March 2010

absolutely splendid. I will keep my eye on you. thanks for a very sober, realistic and encouraging comment.

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Estrella Baldemosa 21 March 2010

I love your poems Ena. Keep on writing!

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Manonton Dalan 16 March 2010

beautiful... reminds me when i was a kid we gather wood for cooking on weekends. it's a lot fun. we gather fruits too. when it rains wood produce lots of smoke and we cry. thanks for very nice poem.write some more.md

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