The Work Poem by Denys E. W. Jones

The Work



Look, it's finished: nothing left to be done.
How heavy feels the pen held in my hand.
Short time ago it was so light,
Lively as quicksilver:
All I had to do was follow it,
It led my hand
As one who sees a blind man leads,
As ladies guide their partners at a ball.
Stop, the work's completed,
Polished, rounded.
If I struck out one word,
A hole would gape and ooze serum.
Were I to add but one,
It would stick out like an ugly wart.
A single change would jar
Like a dog barking at a concert.
What now? How can I let it go?
Each time a work is born you die a bit.

9/10/15

Friday, October 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is a translation of a poem by Primo Levi entitled L'opera. Check out the original if you speak Italian.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 09 October 2015

Each time a work is born; and life goes on! Nice piece. Thaks for sharing.

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