The World, Unfair Poem by Melissa Broomhead

The World, Unfair

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When yuor day is going wrong they tell u to keep your head up;
They dont know how sad u are they dont know your gonna erupt;
Your feelin really down cause your friends are in trouble;
Your friends have to leave u, your turning into rubble;
When your hating life and everyday;
nothings ever good nothing goes your way;
U try to escape your pathetic existance u try to escape this place;
Everyone telling u not to cry. is there ever a quiet space;
Life is very broken your world is so unfair;
Life really sucks u know, for me no one will care;
Unless of course you've got a great friend one who's really true;
Unless of course you've got a great friend one who's there for you;

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Darbyshire 22 June 2006

nice poem, good work, the world is unfair, but some people do care, Love dave xxx

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