Tiffanie Lein

The Wrong Catch

maybe tomorrow i'll forget
the songs you sang the things you said
that cast out miles and miles of net
but i guess too bad, the heart was dead.

Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 25, 2007
Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 26, 2011

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Comments about The Wrong Catch by Tiffanie Lein

  • K. V. VenkataramanaK. V. Venkataramana (4/4/2008 11:41:00 AM)

    The lines of your poem linger long after it has been read. A lovely poem.

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  • Shannon Wright (1/24/2008 9:01:00 AM)

    another ten for me. i love how the name of the poem isn't in the body yet you tied it in with the miles and miles of net. very clever. -shannon

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  • Kee Thampi (1/22/2008 1:04:00 AM)

    tomorrow i'll forget
    the songs you sang the things you said
    that cast out miles and miles of net
    but i guess too bad, the heart was dead.

    a cynic in real life of love

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  • Subbaraman N V (12/12/2007 7:38:00 AM)

    What a simple yet very effective verse! Thanks for sharing!

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