Friday, September 22, 2017

The Zoos Of Thier Highschools Comments

Rating: 4.5

Fake people standing against high rises,
Paper dolls lashed against the gates:

Little girls that once were have gone missing.
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Robert Rorabeck
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Bri Edwards 14 January 2018

i don't know what (if anything) these lines mean, but i like them: Their city a cloister of narcoleptic army ants, Playing football in a hive of decomposing proficiencies: i'm not sure, but i think youth, not youths here: windswept youths- /// ok! i confess. i hypnotized the beautiful girl, ........and it was worth it. bri :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 September 2017

Fake people standing against high rises. Such activity provokes thought. The princess's toe is touching the water where the alligator breaths inches apart. Brilliantly penned poem is powerfully presented here.10

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