-their Mark Poem by Mantrana Mahi Agarwal

-their Mark

Rating: 5.0


At twilight when everything is black,

Something silvery arose from the shadows of dark,

Along with it appeared infinite dynamic twinkles,

The sky looks like the most radiant set of jewellery with clusters of diamond sprinkles,

And those who ever reach these sky diamonds, leave behind their mark.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mantrana Mahi Agarwal 16 May 2018

Thank you for kind words of appreciation and advice.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 20 April 2018

The limerick packs laughs anatomical Into space that is quite economical. But the good ones I've seen So seldom are clean And the clean ones so seldom are comical.[3 A limerick looks like this. You have written a nice poem although it is not a limerick. So, thanks for the poem. I was attracted to see how an Indian limerick would be. Don't mind. Regards. Subhas

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Robert Murray Smith 20 April 2018

Please look up the formatting for a limerick.

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 April 2018

The sky looks like the most radiant set of jewellery with clusters of diamond sprinkles, very fine imagination and poetic expressions.. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 April 2018

Dear Mantrana, such a great poem....10++++++

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