Mantrana Mahi Agarwal

Bronze Star - 2,895 Points (24.08.2005 / Kolkata)

-their Mark - Poem by Mantrana Mahi Agarwal

At twilight when everything is black,

Something silvery arose from the shadows of dark,

Along with it appeared infinite dynamic twinkles,

The sky looks like the most radiant set of jewellery with clusters of diamond sprinkles,

And those who ever reach these sky diamonds, leave behind their mark.

Topic(s) of this poem: fame


Comments about -their Mark by Mantrana Mahi Agarwal

  • (5/16/2018 12:15:00 AM)

    Thank you for kind words of appreciation and advice. (Report)Reply

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  • Subhas Chandra Chakra (4/20/2018 11:37:00 AM)

    The limerick packs laughs anatomical
    Into space that is quite economical.
    But the good ones I've seen
    So seldom are clean
    And the clean ones so seldom are comical.[3
    A limerick looks like this.
    You have written a nice poem although it is not a limerick.
    So, thanks for the poem. I was attracted to see how an Indian limerick would be.
    Don't mind.
    Regards.
    Subhas
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  • Robert Murray Smith (4/20/2018 2:20:00 AM)

    Please look up the formatting for a limerick. (Report)Reply

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  • Drtony Brahmin (4/20/2018 1:25:00 AM)

    The sky looks like the most radiant set of jewellery with clusters of diamond sprinkles,
    very fine imagination and poetic expressions.. thank u dear poetess. tony
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  • Bernard F. Asuncion (4/20/2018 1:22:00 AM)

    Dear Mantrana, such a great poem....10++++++ (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 20, 2018

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 21, 2018


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