Their Own Myth Poem by David Harris

Their Own Myth

Rating: 5.0


They swagger through the wastelands
of their own myth
believing the fantasy
they have built around themselves
of how great they are.
The shallow walls they built around themselves
with one stone could crumble away.
You see them in their peacock glory
prancing around everywhere.
Their heads stretched above the clouds
believing their own myth.
Their feet of clay can only erode
in the full flush of tidal waters.
Their peacock strut will become a limp
when their myth is broken
and things begin to challenge them.
For once, the tidal gate
is breached by leading questions
the clay feet and peacock strut
will be washed away,
and a new myth will absorb,
of bowing head and desperate look in eyes,
as their shallow walls crumble under tidal waters
and their own myth of self-greatness
loses momentum to sustain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 22 November 2009

It's always so much easier to sow than to reap your results especially when you are unused to having to really earn anything by your own hard work. Great writing about incredible slackers (I have some in mind I think this fully applies to, if you can't tell, lol)

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Carol Gall 22 November 2009

excellent david well written 10

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