john tiong chunghoo

Then You Left

then you left
the moon was hardly round
the sun took us through an eclipse
and the migratory birds started
disappearing one by one

Topic(s) of this poem: elegy

Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 15, 2015
Poem Edited: Sunday, March 15, 2015

Form: Tanka


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