Saturday, September 29, 2007

There Are Days Comments

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There are days when everything
we touch crumbles within our hands.
These are the days when we wish
time would rush on by.
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David Harris
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I love the way you pick up on these little instances of truth and form them into a thought-provoking poem. t x

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Francesca Johnson 29 September 2007

There are only 24 hours in each day. Unfortunately I wish that today had MORE hours in it because I have so much to do... Nice poem, David. Love, Fran xxx

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Lelani Faifai 29 September 2007

this poem is so true..on the best days i want it to go on forever..and the bad days i wish i could close my eyes then when i open them it would be gone...but its not....i really enjoyed your poem

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 29 September 2007

when no one in this world understands me, everything i do just turns out wrong.. Thats an old song for me, david...10

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