There's Snow In My Heart! Poem by Long Tooth

There's Snow In My Heart!

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There's snow in my heart for you're distant it seems,
And our friendship of late appears more in my dreams,
There's a coolness I feel although it's not yet Fall,
I must say not aware of offending at all.
My sin loaning you money that you can't return,
Our political differences give you heartburn?
Is there sin not forgiven or pride ill-conceived,
Was your birthday forgotten, propriety grieved?
Your assistance most welcome but I'll still be here,
Until Hell freezes over or clouds disappear.


Long Tooth
August 30,2018

Thursday, August 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: loss,love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 31 August 2018

Such a well penned poem.......................................

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 August 2018

Snow of your heart freezes over cloud. An amazing imagination you have brought up ahead to express sadness. freezes to disappear when love gives light of warmness to melt. An amazing poem is very well penned...10

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