These Eyes Are Watching You Poem by Larry Lynn

These Eyes Are Watching You



These eyes are watching you

...see your words
verbal manifestation of thoughts
portraits painted with syllables
of sensuous simile and meaningful metaphor

not critic but who assimilates random thoughts
cast about like chaff in the swirling wind
no object of idolatry
no persecuting executioner
no special one from any special land
no name, no face, no special place
ubiquitous with comment or without -

just a silent voice that speaks its mind
shadow of your spirit
wisp of your very breath
exhaled for all to breathe

your vigilant sentinal

Wednesday, September 20, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A reader or literary fan can be critically supportive and observant in the wings silently watching another grow in love and friendship.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dawn Novus 20 September 2017

Eternity in these poems would be a song. They are just that calibre.

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