Think More Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Think More

Rating: 5.0


"If she is everything for you"
Show it to world that it is true
You care for her
Take no note of others and bother

"You are soul of my life"
"I shall love to make you as wife"
Such words seem very sweet
But evaporate when real situation greets

It is good to know lovers imagination
He may go all out for lovely relation
Surrender to any demand wish
Even may offer life to end or finish

He may go further to add
"Life shall not be any load"
He will build queen's place
Where he will see only her face

Well, it is alright to fall in love
Think more what all you can believe
Show her real dreams and your commitment
That shall be the real joyous moment

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

“If she is everything for you” Show it to world that it is true

0 0 Reply

Adv Shafiqul Haque Minto nice 12 hours ago · Unlike · 1

0 0 Reply

Joyous FirstTimothy Sanders23 hours ago Keep writing. Keep sharing. Comment +1

0 0 Reply

good theme Dushyant Bhola22 hours ago If.....is everything for you Show it to the world that it is true.... Means that if something is truth, then the truth should be visible also. Nice write. Check out some of my work, if possible. I will appreciate.

0 0 Reply

Nice form Randy Witte22 hours ago And flow. the rhythm is without hiccups and dresses the message subtly but well. Thank you. Comment +1

0 0 Reply

good Michelle Angel22 hours ago the vocabulary could be improved.

0 0 Reply

Re: Think more (Score: 1) by zbird on Friday, June 27,2014 (08: 31: 13) good advice

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Close
Error Success