Wednesday, May 29, 2019

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In the hall the band was loud
I danced serenely as a cloud
And there performed a fine quadrille
With my partner, Daffodil.
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Tom Billsborough
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Nika Mcguin 07 June 2019

Hhaha xD Very funny write. I imagine you would be rejected after all of the kicking lol.

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Susan Williams 30 May 2019

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahha- -my poor bewildered friend- - - try pansy next time, she is too cute to kick bottoms

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wes vogler 29 May 2019

the most common mistake by all poets quadRILLE and DAFFodil are not rhymes... gotcha

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Bojangles 29 May 2019

A wonderful poem that shows your are far from being a masterpoet. Ten for effort.

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Tom Billsborough

Tom Billsborough

Preston Lancashire England
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