This And That Poem by Chip Rice
This And That
You said that or I thought you said that
Or was it you said this and not that
I thought I'd figured it out but that wasn't it
Then what was it if it wasn't this or that
The more I think I have things figured out
The more I always seem to get it wrong
So I'll just throw my hands up in frustration
I'll never figure this one out and so who cares
It would be easier to figure out that age old question
Remember it...the secret to life!
A highly relatable piece depicting communication gap in relationships, well articulated and nicely encapsulated with insight. Thanks for sharing Chip.
Illustrative of a major problem throughout time; lack of communication
Thank you...you are much nicer than the New Yorker magazine was to me...they completely rejected it! (smile)
Just wow. I think pretty much everyone can relate to it. This poem has a unique rhythm and tone. Thanks for sharing.
COOOOOOL MAN and that is how I feel granted there are much better poets than I and really much jazz poems also...I am listening to Lisa Ono-Pretty World as I read your comment you gladden my heart man! Pls send me your poetry also! Cheers
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/6/2024 9:10:38 AM # 1.0.0.1119
beautiful and smooth to read like jazz