Walk in
Open eyes.
See faces
Of loved ones
Step back
Just listen
Hear sounds.
Of happy people.
Come in
Keep relaxed.
Inhale smells
Of wonderful sorts.
Sit down
Take a bite.
Taste joy
Of good food.
Open arms
Hold tight.
Feel warmth
Of someone else.
you spelled bite, bight..oh well, i make mistakes too. I like this poem anyways, good job.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It sounded a bit awkward in some parts (perhaps some rhyming may have helped perfectify it, although it isn't necessary) . I like the same pattern you have flowing through each of the stanzas with the last line always beginning with 'of.' Good writing and subject choice.