This Lovely Haiku Comments

As a Haiku, the syllables or breaths in this is correct making it pleasant to read. Did you know that there are other rules of haiku that makes it both challenging and enjoyable. One is that a season should be implied somehow and another is that the first person is non-allowed. Yet, as you used I love you as a direct object, it can be allowed. Adeline

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