This Moment Poem by Raveendran N.V.

This Moment

Rating: 5.0


The drops
Oozing down
Your fingertips
Are sweet.
Their fragrance
Tempting.

This moment is golden.
Its brightness
Dazzling
Enchanting.

Yet
The unkind evening
Carries the gold away
On its wings.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 15 April 2009

The unexpected is part of the spice of life - captured so evocatively in this beautiful poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 20 March 2009

And yet golden moments linger in the landscapes of the mind. Beautiful last stanza. Wonderful to read you again. Warm regards, Sandra

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John Tiong Chunghoo 31 August 2008

need to get to more of your gold raveen.

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