This September Light: (September 8th,2020) Poem by DM W

This September Light: (September 8th,2020)

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This September light,
Anticipates the solemn
Scatterings of autumn.
It underlines the last sighs
Of green murmurings.
Although it is fainter than
Summer's radiant
Splendour, it still offers
A glint of gold in
These darker, colder mornings.

This September Light: (September 8th,2020)
Wednesday, September 9, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,light,september,summer
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 12 September 2020

And you see with better eyes than me.

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Shaun Cronick 12 September 2020

Hot d a m n! ! You beat me to the punch here Dominic for I had some sketchy notes I was going to shape into a poem along the same themes of a sort. About the light and colour fading, whilst taking a break on a woodland bench in work. And I must admit yours is much more polished and refined than mine. With a different drawing conclusion. A full score though and well done.

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