This Universe Inside Of Me Poem by Katty Briones

This Universe Inside Of Me



There is a whole universe inside of me
But its being sucked into a black whole
A fiery pit of hurt and anger
For some reason I don't do anything about it
I just starve until I am nothing more
Than as thin as paper
And my mother is screaming at me
“You are so much more than this! ”
I am so much more than the numbers on the box
The number on the scale yet I don't feel that way
I feel like this crushing universe is crushing me
That this dieing planet is killing me
And one day it'll go too far and I wont even be paper
Just ash made of the universe inside of me

Friday, May 16, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: planet,anger,hate,numbers
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard John 17 May 2014

You need to correct some of those spelling errors, but otherwise it's good more or less

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Savita Tyagi 16 May 2014

Your poem is therapy for all who go through what you expressed so uniquely. Keep writing, your universe within will grow.

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Brian Jani 16 May 2014

Nice one katty, I.enjoyed it.keep it up hey :)

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