Those You - A Conceit Poem by Muzahidul Reza

Those You - A Conceit

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Yours own hands once loved me
Cared of me
Fed me
Took me walking to ever green path
In life I found a great rath;

Why are those now keeping me far?
Torturing me more
Throwing me to your hands made fire,
I don't know where to go
Leaving my homeland printed my toe;

I am afraid of those hands will kill me
Will cut me
Will tear me
In your hands made artificial hell
Beside your so called prayer hall.

Copyright © Muzahidul Reza | 10/06/2017

Friday, October 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: murder,ruins
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ena Ena 12 October 2017

I am afraid of those hands will kill me Will cut me Will tear me In your hands made artificial hell Beside your so called prayer hall. ..... tragic in fact and pathetic

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John Paul 13 October 2017

Poet, it is a really great poem, Those You cared and now murder, so pathetic in tone,10

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Evi Evi 15 October 2017

I am afraid of those hands will kill me Will cut me Will tear me In your hands made artificial hell Beside your so called prayer hall. extraordinary write 1`0

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Offeliya Seema 17 October 2017

I am afraid of those hands will kill me Will cut me Will tear me In your hands made artificial hell Beside your so called prayer hall. touching poem shared,10

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Muzahidul Reza 06 October 2017

I am afraid of those hands will kill me Will cut me Will tear me In your hands made artificial hell Beside your so called prayer hall.

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Robert Rhyme 26 October 2017

Those You are noway good but ever worst,10

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Afin Son 25 October 2017

I am afraid of those hands will kill me Will cut me Will tear me In your hands made artificial hell Beside your so called prayer hall. extraordinary one

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Afin Son 25 October 2017

Why are those now keeping me far? Torturing me more Throwing me to your hands made fire, I don't know where to go Leaving my homeland printed my toe; greatly done

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Afin Son 25 October 2017

Yours own hands once loved me Cared of me Fed me Took me walking to ever green path In life I found a great rath; great done

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Afin Son 25 October 2017

Those You did well again doing ill, wonderful poem,10

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Charaihatee; Mohangonj; Rajibpur.
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