poet Muzahidul Reza

Muzahidul Reza

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Ode To The Moon

Ode To The Moon
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Usually after the sun's disappear
Weary birds return their nests,
Tired workers close day-works
All get back respective home,

The house wives make dinner
Silently the night falls on them
And on the soft grey earth
Closing and opening another part;

Then in the far vast blue sky
You appear as an ever lamp
To start on burning yourself
To shine dark and mortal earth
With your silvery cool light
For the whole and long night,
As a guard rounds the ground
Oh! you are lonely destined;

People think of that is for
The rules of eternal system,
But I ask you some questions
Whom are you looking for?
In the wilderness of the earth,
Why are you conservative?
Of the light of your other side,
Why do you swell the seas?
The seas roar on the beach,
Why do you wrong yourself?
In expanding and reducing.
How long are you there? When
Lots of stars, meteors, fall down
You are alone for long waiting
With austere attempt as a saint
Where is your companion?
To share your inner bitter pain;

You see here some real facts
In your silvery lean and light
Grey owls hunt feared rats,
Black bats eat labored fruits,
White swans flirt in old pond
Odd nocturnal birds fly away
Flapping their long weary wings;

You hear rivers sweet murmur
But monstrous seas cruelly roar,
You see hungry high waves
Constantly fall on the beaches;

Your companion has been taken
And killed by the hungry ocean
So, you see only the ghost of her
But you will get no one, no more.

Copyright © Muzahidul Reza | 4 October, 2016

Topic(s) of this poem: moon, pain

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 4, 2016
Poem Edited: Friday, August 3, 2018

Form: Ode


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  • Hopes (4/5/2019 1:49:00 AM)

    An incredible written, moon is remarkably and fabulously drawn here

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  • Gius U. T. (1/19/2019 8:34:00 AM)

    Your companion has been taken
    And killed by the hungry ocean
    So, you see only the ghost of her
    But you will get no one, no more.

    So touching stanza it is! So pathetic stanza it is! Heart depressing

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  • Gius U. T. (1/19/2019 8:31:00 AM)

    Wow! Its a great poem and masterpiece sir, moon is so fantastically scrutinized, as if, you have yourself visited it, loved this Great poem

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  • Poet of poets (1/11/2019 1:42:00 AM)

    Moon is always moving and helping, it may have pains if we think, it is ordered to do and obey

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  • Nowzhin (1/7/2019 10:56:00 PM)

    O, moon, poor moon,
    sympathy here you are shown,
    great one, dear poet

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  • Christian (12/18/2018 5:20:00 AM)

    Moon and its plights go together to help others, as if, it burns itself to enlighten all others, through dome unique imageries you have outstandingly caused stand a great poem in this site, here you are a great poet, dear writer, congratulations

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  • Salem AliSalem Ali (11/21/2018 6:47:00 AM)

    Moon is wonderfully captured in this poem, excellent piece

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  • Fiadh FidaFiadh Fida (11/7/2018 8:02:00 AM)

    Ever written one, on / to moon I have read too many poems but like this have not seen and read, thank you a lot, dear poet for this great poem

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  • Zefi Ar (10/28/2018 11:43:00 PM)

    A great ode poem to moon has been ever written, very interesting to read and earn knowledge

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  • Nisa Putri (10/22/2018 5:09:00 AM)

    You hear rivers sweet murmur
    But monstrous seas cruelly roar,
    You see hungry high waves
    Constantly fall on the beaches; heart touching

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  • Nisa Putri (10/22/2018 5:08:00 AM)

    A great poem,
    Ever written, loved

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  • Ena EnaEna Ena (10/18/2018 5:06:00 AM)

    Moon is shining with pathos,
    Several imageries have done the poem great,10

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  • Fiadh FidaFiadh Fida (10/17/2018 11:55:00 PM)

    A heart touching moon it is in this site, proud of it, thanks poet

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  • Fiadh FidaFiadh Fida (10/17/2018 11:53:00 PM)

    A great moon it is in this site, we all love it,10

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  • Sem RalfhSem Ralfh (10/7/2018 10:54:00 PM)

    With your silvery cool light
    For the whole and long night,
    As a guard rounds the ground
    Oh! you are lonely destined; ........ with some pathos moon does shine for the whole night, outstanding

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  • Sem RalfhSem Ralfh (10/7/2018 10:51:00 PM)

    Then in the far vast blue sky
    You appear as an ever lamp
    To start on burning yourself
    To shine dark and mortal earth, ..... moon's greatness is expressed truly

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  • Sem RalfhSem Ralfh (10/7/2018 10:50:00 PM)

    Lonely moon appears here in this poem with well shining and inner pain of its own, a great outstanding poem

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  • Truth Man (10/1/2018 5:08:00 AM)

    I will read and comment on it again

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  • Truth Man (10/1/2018 5:07:00 AM)

    Then in the far vast blue sky
    You appear as an ever lamp
    To start on burning yourself
    To shine dark and mortal earth, what a greatly and truly done!

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  • Truth Man (10/1/2018 5:04:00 AM)

    The house wives make dinner
    Silently the night falls on them
    And on the soft grey earth
    Closing and opening another part; great starting with crafts

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