Sonnet - 3: What Civilization You Do Draw Man! Poem by Muzahidul Reza

Sonnet - 3: What Civilization You Do Draw Man!

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What civilization you do draw, man!
Enlightening some too little candles,
Beneath centuries' deep darkness is seen
Which is engulfing your own existence;
Humans degrade humans loosing devils
And sins of lust, murder, crimes, corruptions
Wars, violence, greed, hatred, all evils
Are enough to finish all perfections;
Leave me here in this hungry wilderness,
In this ferocious cage leave me alone,
I won't return to your shocking darkness
Which is spoiling my every bone and clone;
Where is human in your earth of animal?
Need find out but everywhere lives devil.

Copyright © Muzahidul Reza | 21 February, 2017

Sonnet - 3: What Civilization You Do Draw Man!
Tuesday, February 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: wildlife ,violence,murder,cheat,war,corruption,crime,darkness,hypocrisy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 21 April 2018

Humans degrade humans loosing devils And sins of, murder, crimes, corruptions Wars, violence, greed, hatred, all evils Are enough to finish all perfections; .......i wont return to ur shocking darkness., so many things happen dear friend poet. did u hear about the rape of the 8 year old in kashmir. i wonder why no one writes about it. i want to write about. we poets should write against injustices.. thank u for this great poem and your thoughts.. tony

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Muzahidul Reza 21 April 2018

Poemhunter itself is willingly missing some words we comment, I don't know the causes, ............. you can check, thanks

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Muzahidul Reza 21 April 2018

Hello! dear poet, you have missed an important word, here in your commenting second line. which includes rape, sexual abuses happening all over the world not only in Kasmir; You may see again, thank you

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Ena Ena 21 April 2018

A great poem shared very wisely showing modern dangerous plights of humans and humanity

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Mohendro Endro 26 June 2017

Humans should realise in time, othewise, it will be too late

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Semi, 10 August 2019

Good poem, call to the right path

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Impressive Poem 24 May 2018

So impressed, but humans are now blind, deaf they neither can see nor can hear they are living in deep darkness

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Spoiling 24 May 2018

They themselves are spoiling all, your writings exactly say

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Great Reader 21 May 2018

A fabulous imageric sonnet has ever been written, it clearly shows wrongs, corruptions are being committed seriously all over the world, ....... Writings are for especially human beings but now a days probably they do not study and have no tendencies to be OK anyway, ...... so they are not resolved, on the other hand they are committing more wrongs, I see their future full of darkness

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Titan 19 May 2018

Yes, poet You rightly write Human beings today, ..........

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Charaihatee; Mohangonj; Rajibpur.
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