Thought Poem by Weldon Davis

Thought

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For weeks felt weak
For months felt blue
Through it all doll
I thought of you

Every waking moment
Every song I hear
Dreams of our passion
Reality of our fears
Came true
O so true
Darling I thought of you

How could I change
Yet stay the same
Person you fell in love with
Attracted to who?
Girl I thought of you

On New Years, Christmas, and Valentines
In my heart
On my mind
I feel crazy
Craze-E

As I wonder
Yeah I wonder
Do you ever think of me

Monday, January 25, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life,friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cynthia Buhain-baello 25 January 2016

So very profound and intense, sometimes love itself hurts so bad. Great write, brilliantly worded and superb use of the repetition technique.

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Weldon Davis 25 January 2016

Thank you for your comment and critique of my poem...I wrote Thought almost 10 years ago and just dug it out of an old shoe box..There are some rare instances where we write something that just resonates no matter what year it may be...Thank you

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Fayetteville NC USA
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