Thought Of God Poem by ARYAN MOHANTY

Thought Of God

Rating: 5.0


If I would be there in the world
To live life with you in the slum,
I would be very glad
To express my sadness through the thrum.

If I would explicit my forlornness
And tell you how I feel,
I must share my madness
By watching the humans turning evil.

If on a dizzy wrength
You all turn to pale,
Then how can I convince me
By the sight of heaven turning to hell.

If some vocate to save the earth
By praying and beseeching to the lord,
Say me one to help me along
If I am helpless as the god.

Thought Of God
Sunday, October 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: god,human condition,virtue
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Binayakumar Mohanty 15 October 2017

Nicely crafted poem. Wonderful feelings. I loved it.

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VeiL24 03 January 2022

You're Breathtaking

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Jazib Kamalvi 22 November 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Aryan M. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Rajendra Rout 29 October 2018

I enjoy this poem. I agree with you sir

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Aryan Mohanty 10 November 2017

Today I m going 2 post my second poem

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 03 November 2017

If some vocate to save the earth By praying and beseeching to the lord, Say me one to help me along If I am helpless as the god. Beautiful poem shared dear Aryan, keep it up. Where is the second poem? 10+++ for the poem.

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Aryan Mohanty 18 October 2017

Tnx for stating ur feelings

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