poet Hasmukh Amathalal

Hasmukh Amathalal

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Thoughts

Mind is pre occupied with thought
No win even after battles fought,
No results even after lessons taught,
No peace despite comforts bought,

Is that we have gone so much insane,
Our prestige at low and efforts in vane,
Roads all clear and deserted lane,
Sky too calm but only noise of plane,

Nothing will improve or find change,
Look even shabby even you arrange,
Does not require outward finish,
It is sign of doom’s day and perishes,

Reforms in thoughts and sincere action,
Will bring all change without any question,
World at large will have joy and benefit,
Simple thought and no brake or limit,

What I am searching in selfish world,
What I look around and develop feet cold,
Do I lack vision or ideas bold?
Do I stand on slippery land and not properly hold?

It is senseless thought war only in mind,
Never parallel in history you find,
Mind vicious and no place for views kind,
All ready to give you push from behind,

Who should I trust and whom to avoid?
Find no excuse or reason solid,
Will have to use mind and common sense,
Must leave behind thoughts and tense,

I failed to distinguish what is wrong or right,
Unnecessary quarrel and useless fight,
Peace will elude and goal not in sight,
Will emerge end of tunnel with bright light

Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 20, 2009

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  • K.v. Subbarao (10/10/2009 9:41:00 AM)

    that we have gone so much insane,
    Our prestige at low and efforts in vane

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  • Raju Rajput (10/9/2009 6:04:00 AM)

    Mind is pre occupied with thought
    No win even after battles fought,
    No results even after lessons taught,

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  • Maulin Shah (10/7/2009 10:41:00 PM)

    Reforms in thoughts and sincere action,
    Will bring all change without any question

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  • Shilpa Maheswari (10/7/2009 8:57:00 PM)

    Is that we have gone so much insane,
    Our prestige at low and efforts in vane,
    Roads all clear and deserted lane,

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  • Kamli Kamal (10/7/2009 8:38:00 PM)

    Mind is pre occupied with thought
    No win even after battles fought,
    No results even after lessons taught

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  • Suresh Vakil (10/2/2009 7:54:00 AM)

    Nothing will improve or find change,
    Look even shabby even you arrange,

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  • Shalini Sundararamalingam (9/16/2009 4:56:00 AM)

    wonderful thoughts never fade away from our mind... nice poem.

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  • Philosophy of a DewyFlower (8/30/2009 10:24:00 AM)

    Simple thought and no brake or limit, ..... nice

    mind is the shelter of thought...
    each thought dwells a neuron...

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  • Argum Sheth (8/19/2009 7:38:00 AM)

    thoughts ae in mind always...10

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  • Durga Sethani (8/19/2009 7:10:00 AM)

    mind is permanent home for thoughts....10

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  • Jayant Manik (8/14/2009 8:46:00 AM)

    thoughts take place inmind....10

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  • Kant Shri (8/14/2009 8:36:00 AM)

    mind is always occupied with thoughts....10

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  • Ritul Soni (8/1/2009 9:25:00 PM)

    Mind is pre occupied with thought
    No win even after battles fought,
    thoughts are full in mind...10

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  • Ratna Patel (8/1/2009 11:22:00 AM)

    Mind is pre occupied with thought
    No win even after battles fought,
    mind if full of thoughts...10

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  • Ketan Rajgor (8/1/2009 12:51:00 AM)

    Mind is pre occupied with thought
    No win even after battles fought,
    mind is always aooocupied with thoughts....10

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  • Pittle Shaileja (7/28/2009 11:23:00 PM)

    Mind is pre occupied with thought
    No win even after battles fought,
    No results even after lessons taught, .. it is full of thoughts...10

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  • Trevor William (7/27/2009 9:13:00 PM)

    Mind is pre occupied with thought
    No win even after battles fought,
    No results even after lessons taught,
    No peace despite comforts bought,
    it is always full of thoughts....10

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  • Kamlesh Ambalal (7/27/2009 7:36:00 PM)

    Mind is pre occupied with thought
    No win even after battles fought,
    mind is always preoccupited with thought..good or bad...10

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  • Bharati Bhikhubhai (7/26/2009 11:21:00 PM)

    Mind is pre occupied with thought
    No win even after battles fought,
    No results even after lessons taught,
    it is full of thoughts...10

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  • Sejal Kapadia (7/22/2009 8:13:00 PM)

    Mind is pre occupied with thought
    No win even after battles fought,
    No results even after lessons taught,
    No peace despite comforts bought, ....thoughts do emerge in mind.. good place...10

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