Thoughts Of An Old Man Poem by Fred Babbin

Thoughts Of An Old Man

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I stand still
while movement is all round me.
I stand still at the margin of life
with so little time
and so much to do.
My list grows longer
My navel grows deeper
and so I “rest a minute”,
a living death—
I have another cough drop
- I need the stimulation
and go about my business.
“Do I contradict myself?
Very well then, I contradict myself”
Although I do not contain multitudes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barbara Sallee 18 June 2009

Fred, Another great write, certainly a thinker

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Sonny Rainshine 06 December 2008

Very Whitmanesque and thoughtful. I like the image of standing still while everything around us is in constant movement. It is in such moments, I think, that some of the best poetry gets written.

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