Thoughts On A Rooftop Poem by Maria Turley

Thoughts On A Rooftop

Rating: 3.8


As the sun beats down
On my already browned, naked body,
The beads of sweat trickle down
My arms, my neck, and my thighs.
A breeze so cool ripples over my toes
Then up my body,
Till it touches those beads of wet
On my face and nose.

Oh how cool for a second or two,
Not long enough really,
But a breeze will do now and then.
I lie here almost asleep,
Dreamy and nice just waiting again
For the slightest murmur of air to move over me.

My hair is wet.
Oh how hot it is.
Now I have a yawn and a stretch,
I think I will turn over
Face my back to the sky,
My bare body none of it is dry.

It’s so peaceful here,
High on a rooftop.
No-one to bother me.
I have just heard the distant sound of a church bell
It chimed three times
But never mind.

An hour or two more
In this beautiful heat of the August sun.
My back is feeling all moist,
Yet another small ball of water
Rolls down my waist.

A far away radio brings music to my ears,
I don’t know if I want to listen
Or be half asleep – pretend not to hear.
Breezes breezes, how lovely,
But now I am asleep, really asleep.

Sunday, July 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: summer time
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written 8th August 1975 when I was starting to live again after a divorce
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 25 July 2015

Beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated and nicely penned with insight. A lovely narrative poem written with conviction. A good one indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 July 2015

Cool ripples over my toes! With the mus eof nature. Nice work.

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Maria Turley 23 July 2015

Thank you for your response Edward!

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