Three Dangerous Words Poem by Laura arwen

Three Dangerous Words



The three dangerous
words are shame
anger and hatred
Some people are
against them
These words are
in the real
and the best
music in this
world
Shame, anger and
hatred has used
in the repression
for many innocent
people
These people cry
a lot cause
they are inside
a bad and
terrible box
These three dangerous
words destroy a
lot of life
Maybe from next
100 years these
three dangerous words
are disappeared
I'm not sure!
I hope in
Jesus and in
God
Fortunately I haven't
got these words
but maybe I
have some anger
and some hatred
They aren't in
the rock music
These words are
a mad restraint
They don't permit
sex, vodka and
whisky
For these words
don't exist the
good relax
With shame, hatred
and anger I
wander by the
streets
The three dangerous
words are asleep
These words are
a willful and
fearful tremble and
scorn

Tuesday, March 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: words
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 15 March 2017

The energy your poem releases is immediate. I read it several times, including out loud and each time my voice increased the speed of my reading! The three words are certainly WORDS AS WEAPONS: when spoken they carry toxins which infect both the target audience AND the speaker! I'm not sure about this, but it seems to me starting with the line THESE WORDS DON'T EXIST you adopt a bold strategy: You can't stop these words from causing harm, so you try to abolish them by sheer force of will. It may be a quixotic gesture, but the Don Quixotes of the world even today are heroes! !

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