Three Senryu New Poem by Jan Oskar Hansen

Three Senryu New

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Senryu

A year is a breath
A trivial cosmic moment
For me it is life

Life is not a plateau
But a stormy uphill struggle
The upland is a dream

He stopped dreaming
In the middle of the night
Death fell soft as rain.

Saturday, July 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: senryu
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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 July 2017

Vital cosmic moment gives breath of year of feelings. He stepped dreaming and death fell as soft rain. An interesting poem is shared here of course.10

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