Victoria Ritchie

Rookie (17th September 1990)

Tick Tock...Tick Tock...Tick Tock - Poem by Victoria Ritchie

Watching the clock…
Tick tick tick…
I pass this life by…
Watching the clock…
Tick tick tick….
The precious moments fade to grey…
Watching the clock…
Tick tick tick….
We wait to die…
Watching the clock…
Tick tick tick…
What happens when time runs out…?
Tick…tick…


Comments about Tick Tock...Tick Tock...Tick Tock by Victoria Ritchie

  • Bigyan MainaliBigyan Mainali (7/4/2017 10:45:00 AM)

    Very depth kept om short way (Report)Reply

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  • Nigel NortonNigel Norton (11/30/2015 8:16:00 AM)

    Loved it....and read it again just to make sure I had taken it in. (Report)Reply

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  • Kyra SchaneelKyra Schaneel (6/21/2012 5:02:00 PM)

    I really like your peom. can i say a suggestion. **only a kind suggestion** for the different ticks it could be like this
    1 tick tock tick
    2 tock tick tock
    3 tick tock tick
    4 tock tick tock
    5 tick..tick...
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  • David Darbyshire (6/8/2006 7:18:00 AM)

    wind it up? ..............................: -) (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 8, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 23, 2008


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