Tiki Hut Poem by Barry Middleton

Tiki Hut



whenever life seems in a rut
I sneak away to the tiki hut
it's just a little south of town
where friendliness is always found
I'll have a glass of beer or two
and if you'd like then you come too
we'll let our troubles drift away
into the sunset on the bay
until the darkness in the west
directs us home to welcome rest

Tiki Hut
Friday, September 2, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship,relaxing,sunset
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I was so pleased that I could make the phrase 'you come too' work here. See Robert Frost's 'The Pasture'.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Manonton Dalan 02 September 2016

it reminds me of tiki hut in waikiki hawaii..hahhahahahhaha... mai tai ...aloha

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Barry Middleton 03 September 2016

Any tike hut is a good tiki hut! Thanks for commenting.

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