Friday, November 30, 2007

Time Goes By Comments

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Tick Tock...Tick Tock.
'Time Goes By.'
And I'm still not losing it.
Losing the thought of it.
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Michael Smith
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Pandora Chaos 13 February 2008

Thats a sweet poem. i like it hope u write more poems like this

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Riquetta Elliott 07 December 2007

Its sound like me and my boyfriend no matter what problems or arguments we had, we will still stay together like in the last stanza ' The love will follow us forever.' Lovely poem.

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Michael Smith

Michael Smith

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