Time- My Enemy Poem by alan ellis

Time- My Enemy

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Someone once said
time heals all pain
but what can it do
when you're dying in vane?

It may dry a tear
but it cant make you see
erase whats been done
bring you back to me

My cold empty bed
it dont put you there,
let me kiss your lips,
run fingers through your hair.

It don't close the distance
of twelve hundred miles,
put me in your heart,
let me have your smiles.

It dont take new pictures
of us at our best.
All that its doing
is laying our love to rest.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 19 January 2010

nice, time and tide wait for no man

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Bonnie Lundgren 15 January 2010

Time doesn't have to bring pain and loneliness, Alan. You may not believe it, but God cares about you, and he is the one who heals, if you let him. I speak to the heart of your poem, and not the writing of it. The writing could be better, but the heart is clear.

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Time in and of itself cannot heal if fact some things get worst over time if they are not dealt with in the right way. This is a very truthful perspective. Profound and practical my friend.

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