time giving
youth laughing
sands joy falling
experience learning
interaction tumbling
age heart beats racing
wisdom whispering
new life bestowing
shadows creeping
smiles leaping
lights fading
time dying
Copyright © Terence George Craddock
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This poem is spelled out in sounds (whisper laugh) abstract (learn) but most powerfully spelled in movements (give (bestow) tumble race fade dye..) Just reading the end lines describes a 'human situation' this is for the lack of a better expression :) . I like it. Reminds me of Earth Pulse, another of yours, but like a 'human' pulse.