Time Set Giving Poem by Terence George Craddock (Spectral Images and Images Of Light)

Time Set Giving

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time giving
youth laughing
sands joy falling
experience learning
interaction tumbling
age heart beats racing
wisdom whispering
new life bestowing
shadows creeping
smiles leaping
lights fading
time dying


Copyright © Terence George Craddock

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miroslava Odalovic 17 June 2011

This poem is spelled out in sounds (whisper laugh) abstract (learn) but most powerfully spelled in movements (give (bestow) tumble race fade dye..) Just reading the end lines describes a 'human situation' this is for the lack of a better expression :) . I like it. Reminds me of Earth Pulse, another of yours, but like a 'human' pulse.

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