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little birdies praising God,
in fresh air near by dawn,
while you are snoozing flagrantly,
neglecting the time to rise and shine.
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I don't know why but I felt like reading again and again. very very nice.
Flowing and fascinating. oh how ungrateful you are, supremest creature of world you are, ........ very touching. Impressed little Hafsa.......
BEAUTIFUL...With all sweetness n innocence...eye-catching, n arresting line little birdies praising God, ....never lets the reader go anywhere b/4 completing the poem... :)
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12/9/2025 7:23:46 PM # 1.0.0
A well articulated Devotional piece of poetry written with spiritual insight. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.