breanna wilson

Time To Spread My Wings And Fly

mom and dad dont want to let go
they want to keep me a little girl forever
with bows and ribbons to tie my curly hair in
they hate to see me grow up so fast but it is now time to spread my wings far and fly, fly away from the child hood life
when boys had cooties, and when makeup wasnt such a big deal
when you would ride your bike for the first time with out your training wheels and dad would let go and you would keep going with out stoping because he forgot to teach you how too
well yall have taught me how to spread my wings and fly
but when i take off im not landing! ! ! it is now time for me to
take off on a flight of adventure.

Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 22, 2007
Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 26, 2011

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Comments about Time To Spread My Wings And Fly by breanna wilson

  • Aldo Kraas (11/22/2007 10:33:00 PM)

    it is interesting because when I read it
    I see the guilt that you are feeling
    And I also see your pain
    All your hurts I see
    You are full of scars
    Your parents are not allowing you to be free
    So they made you into a prisoner
    And you pay for it
    I am also seeing in your poem that you are
    Sad that your parents never thought
    Something that is valuable in your life
    And also you are ashame of wearing second hand clothes
    All the kids have nice clothes
    And the other kids probably tease you about
    It is not going to be easy in High school
    They will tease you too
    They done to me lot's of times
    During school lunch break I went for a while to the mall
    I just wanted peace for myself and get away from those horrible rotten kids

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  • Melvin BanggollayMelvin Banggollay (11/22/2007 9:52:00 PM)

    Yes, be as free as the wind
    but make sure you have the wing
    that can carry you to your dreams
    for I know they want you a cream
    sweet as honey and best of things.

    thanks and I love you babe

    melvin

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