Saturday, February 7, 2009

Étincelles Pour Les Amoreaux Comments

Rating: 5.0

(dedicated to Ms. Liza Ferschtman, a gifted violinist)

mist upon silent hill
loneliness surrounds
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Lynda Robson 11 February 2009

Another wonderful tribute, your poems are quite unique Ahmad, and very enjoyable to read, 10 Lynda xx

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Carol Rhodes 09 February 2009

Did the shaky lonely sense of isolation and separatiion end in a night of love? All the doubts and longing erased when your beloved came to her senses and connected with you? Just guessing. For some reason, Ahmad, with your depth and explosive mind and spirit, I cannot imagine that you would have to pine and beg for a single thing! Another intricate and subliminal journey. Thank you! Carol

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Sebastine Humaemo 09 February 2009

waaa dude splendid write............tribute to your love.........'darling, now comes all sweetness to your reddish love'.........crazy line......admired t...awesome...sebastine 10++

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Subbaraman N V 09 February 2009

A great tribute to the gifted violinist! Thanks for sharing.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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