Tiny Mosquito Poem by Raunak Sarada
Tiny Mosquito
Tiny Mosquito
What do you think dear
I know you are here
How cute you look when suck my blood
But you don't care how i felt good or full of mud
Get lost from here, why you born
Oh! i am coming please stop this horn
But you only torn skin not the soul
Here living some human mosquito in our country's boul
Here you are dead because lack of bread
But they suck people 's blood till their death
You born from a mosquito so that's why this is your nature
But they birth from a human real
Aren't they behave like wild animal
It is a good poem, but many things can be presented better; especially the upper case and lower case letters, and avoid joining of two words. The first third line has a mistake - it should be 'here' not 'hear'. However, in any case, I see humour and that's the centre around which the poem rotates.
Nicely expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful piece of poetry.
Write comment. A good start, Raunak. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks
thanks vaibhav i think it is a typing mistake i am glad you liked it
thanks vaibhav i think it is a typing mistake i am glad you liked it
thanks vaibhav i think it is a typing mistake i am glad you liked it
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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9/18/2024 3:15:01 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Amazing poem is brilliantly penned observing tiny mosquito that expresses wise humor on political perception. This is very thought provoking. Welcome to PoemHunter....10