Tiny Mosquito Comments

Nicely expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful piece of poetry.

Write comment. A good start, Raunak. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

thanks vaibhav i think it is a typing mistake i am glad you liked it

thanks vaibhav i think it is a typing mistake i am glad you liked it

thanks vaibhav i think it is a typing mistake i am glad you liked it

It is a good poem, but many things can be presented better; especially the upper case and lower case letters, and avoid joining of two words. The first third line has a mistake - it should be 'here' not 'hear'. However, in any case, I see humour and that's the centre around which the poem rotates.

Amazing poem is brilliantly penned observing tiny mosquito that expresses wise humor on political perception. This is very thought provoking. Welcome to PoemHunter....10