Friday, November 11, 2016

Tirol In Late Autumn Comments

Rating: 5.0

I recall the soft white pastures
Etched out between the fells,
Which spilled their darker tones
Down slopes like forest groupings.
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Tom Billsborough
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Bharati Nayak 15 November 2016

Nature's beauty so vivid in your poem- -The snowy picture of nature is etched in your memory which you fondly remember.To quote some lines from this lovely poem- - - - - - I recall the unique gestures Of snowflakes in the breeze Metallic Matin bells Now ringing through the trees. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - A Lady passed and said Gruss Gott. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - As I recall that meeting. And briefly did I turn As her footsteps etched the meadow.

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Tom Billsborough 16 November 2016

thank you, Bharati. It was the sounds of the cow bells and the little train's whistle I remember in the clear morning air and the unexpected snowfall and the beautiful, fairy tale Austrian Villages, It was like waking up in Wonderland! Loved the Austrian food too. Those bread rolls with Apricot jam, Wiener Schnitchel and Apfel Strudel. If I could wave a magic wand and transport the Tirol close to the Sea I'd live there!

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Annette Aitken 12 November 2016

Tom this is a lovely calming piece.....your words paint such a lovely picture..these words stick out most to me...Frost spread its bony hands, Its print of bones outside, ......it was all beautiful but these words drew me right in.... Annette

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Tom Billsborough 12 November 2016

My first holidays abroad were in the Tirol and I've never forgotten those Fairy tale villages of Mutters (meaning Mothers) and Natters (meaning Grandmothers) . They were about four miles from Innsbruck but a few thousand feet higher. Once it snowed in September!

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