Sunday, September 24, 2017

To A Certain Lady Comments

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Your smile is my subliminal light.
Your voice the chlorophyll,
Instilling growth
Within the garden of my dreams.
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Tom Billsborough
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Tom Billsborough 29 September 2017

I was thinking of women in general and the delightful effect they mostly have on me. I sometimes wonder what you Ladies see in us men though!

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Susan Williams 28 September 2017

You are unexpected- -again. How in the world did you take the most unromantic words [ subliminal light, chlorophyll, , Instilling growth, presume ] and make a beautiful bouquet of.love like this? ? ? ? ? ? ? ! ! ! ! ! My neurons sing like happy bees And may my honeyed tones Touch you as you touch me. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Tis the sweetest blooming love poem I have read in a long long time! ! !

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Laurie Van Der Hart 24 September 2017

Tom, I love your sustained plant metaphor - simple and powerful. Let your love bloom!

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Tom Billsborough 24 September 2017

Somebody bought me some seeds in the Spring. They've bloomed well. So this is a kind of thank you.

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Tom Billsborough

Preston Lancashire England
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