To An Unseen Star Poem by Razu ahmed Mamun

To An Unseen Star

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You
like a window
a piece of sky
far away
a rhythm of pain
you
as an ecstasy of a poet
and pain and peace and pain
you
not a star outside the window
but a star of unseen sky.

by Razu Ahmed Mamun

To An Unseen Star
Monday, November 13, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain,painful
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
love and pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 05 December 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Razu. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 November 2017

Welcome to PH dot com. Dear Razu from the beginning you are successful to post a beautiful blues poem having touching expression and nice collocations. The love and pain has been nicely inscribed that I appreciate. Thank u Razu, keep the ball rolling.10

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Razu ahmed Mamun 05 December 2017

Thank you Kumarmani Mahakul

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