To Be Honest Comments

To be honest Kylie, this was a helluva work. Anyone who doesn't believe he is sixteen is mistaken, he's this talented, and he is that young....I should know he's my best friend. but great work Kyle, a little emo, but good nonetheless

Love the name. Love the title. Don't believe the persona for a minute! But that is my paranoia of being an internet writer or nearing men AHHHHH Pause age perhaps! lol You describe the tug of love/hate relationship perfectly Captain. But for you to write this at 16 seems pretty far fetched all the same. Excellent rhythm to this poem. Welcome to PH, I look forward to reading more, Tai