Love me forever as I love you,
I need your love to live life through,
When I found you that first time,
My life turned to joy and sublime,
When I lost you, I was so sad,
Life had turned on me so bad,
Then you found me 18 years after,
I didn't believe and brought me laughter,
When I did believe you were there,
I was astonished at what we were,
Two lovers wanting to be together,
Separated physically, but not for ever,
Now all I want is to see you again,
Make love to you and never refrain,
That is fantastic. The love the passion and the desire you have shown in this poem is amazing. I could go with the poem without reading to your story. Well written.
You dont need extravaganza words and fantastic rhyme..simply sweet and the honest feeling already make your poem really highly appreciated, i like the flowing words as it smoothly from your smiles and past days that you enjoyed..and the description make it even more sweeter, for that i vote you 10 because of your talent and the poured all emotions.. :) Unwritten Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I was astonished at what we were, Two lovers wanting to be together, Separated physically, but not for ever, fantastic meeting.... love remains and remains and remains if it is true on the innermost reccesses of the heart. thank you dear poet. tony