Wednesday, December 25, 2019

To My Love Comments

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A bedroom enjoys clouds out of the window
A pair of limpid eyes drenched in sorrow
Once I was a wisp of wind drifting away
Not knowing you would not there stay
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Brent Yan
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Chinedu Dike 26 December 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely penned from the heart. A beautiful creation nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing, Brent.

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Brent 02 January 2020

Thanks for your appreciation,Dike. Glad you like this poem.

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