To My Lover Poem by Sarah Hamid

To My Lover

Rating: 5.0


To whom leave me a lone with his pictures and his memories
To whom crying me and destroyed my dreams
To whom drawing the smile on my lips and pull out it by force from me
To whom make me fly in sky and dropp me on the earth by his order
To whom leave me without fault meant from me
To whom leave me prisoner of his laying words
To whom attach me to his frankness with me and his love
To whom puzzling me and didn't let me understand him

I LOVE YOU...my tortured and my killer

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Kamran Haider 27 February 2009

Little painful yet beautiful... keep writing...

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 04 March 2009

a touching lament of a lover, well done

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Rajinder Singh 25 June 2010

sadness has been broughtout well.beautiful poem.keep writing

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Akram Awadat 05 February 2010

nice poem, well done

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 May 2009

Nice I Love You poem.

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 29 April 2009

your words are truly magical and lovely.. he's one lucky dude! u amazing!

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Oluko George 06 March 2009

You've employed relevant styles--description, rhythm through repetition, humour and Irony.Keep up!

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